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Пример эссе по теме «Профессии»

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ЗАДАНИЕ 38.1

Imagine that you are doing a project on what professions teenagers consider prestigious in your region. You have found some data on the subject — the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

The survey question: What professions do you consider to be the most prestigious?

ProfessionsNumber of teenagers (%)
Lawyer53
Programmer49
Economist32
Manager17
Doctor10

Write 200–250 words.

Use the following plan:

  • make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
  • select and report 2–3 facts; — make 1–2 comparisons where relevant;
  • outline a problem that can arise with choosing a career by teenagers and suggest a way of solving it;
  • conclude by giving your personal opinion on the importance of a career choice in teenagers’ life.

Пример эссе

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The project I am currently working on is aimed at finding out what professions teenagers consider prestigious in your region. I have found a table with the results of a survey. I am going to comment on the survey and give my opinion on the subject of the project.

According to the table answering the question «what professions do you consider to be the most prestigious?», the most prestigious profession is a lawyer, at 53%. A total of 32 % of teenagers choose to be an economist, at 32%, followed by a manager, at 17%.

It is clear from the table that the number of respondents who want to be a programmer is significantly higher than the figure for those who will be doctors. (49% and 10% respectively). This is not surprising, as programmers are better — paid than doctors nowadays.

Regrettably, some problems may arise with choosing a career by teenagers. There is a problem of a lack of self-knowledge. 

Teenagers’ interests and personalities change rapidly. 

It is hard to choose a permanent career based on a temporary phase. To solve this problem teenagers can visit a school career counselor to identify their strengths and suitable careers for them.

In conclusion, choosing a profession is one of the most important decisions for any teenager. Choosing a profession sets the direction for their entire adult life.

220 words

ЗАДАНИЕ 38.2

Imagine that you are doing a project on what factors mainly influence the choice of a future career in Zetland. You have found some data on the subject — the results of the opinion polls (see the table below). Comment on the data in the table and give your opinion on the subject of the project.

The survey question: Who mainly influences your choice of career?

Factors of influenceNumber of respondents (%)
Parents40
Teachers22
Friends16
Media (TV, Internet, social networks)13
Other role model9

Write 200–250 words.

Use the following plan:

  • make an opening statement on the subject of the project;
  • select and report 2–3 facts;
  • make 1–2 comparisons where relevant and give your comments;
  • outline a problem that can arise with choosing a ‘future career’ and suggest a way of solving it;
  • conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on who can help you choose a future career.

Пример эссе

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The project I am currently working on is aimed at finding out what factors mainly influence the choice of a future career in Zetland. I have found a table with the results of a survey. I am going to comment on the survey and give my opinion on the subject of the project.

According to the table answering the question «who mainly influences your choice of career ?», as many as 22% of respondents follow their teacher’s advice, followed by friends, at 16%. A minority of those surveyed are influenced by other role models.

It is clear from the table that the number of interviewees who follow their parents’ advice is significantly higher than the figure for those who search for advice in the media (40% and 13% respectively). This is not surprising, as parents are the people who are trusted the most unlike the media which is full of misleading information. 

Regrettably, some problems may arise with choosing a future career. There is a problem of a lack of self-knowledge. 

Teenagers’ interests and personalities change rapidly. 

It is hard to choose a permanent career based on a temporary phase. To solve this problem teenagers can take online personality or career quizzes to know what professions suit them better.

In conclusion, many different people can help teenagers choose a future career. They can be family members, parents, older siblings, or even aunts and uncles. At school, there are trained professionals such as career counselors whose job is to help students.

250 words

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